Tuesday, August 16, 2011
Critique my poem?
im capativated by the essence of beauty radiating off her skin such a beautiful site its a intense struggle to simply look the other way trapped in a dormant state of mind as i gaze upon her long luscious envirgorating hair i morph into the form that of a statue as she stares with those deep eyes i could stare right back into them for hours at a time her sweet innocent laughter illuminates my soul engulfing me with sheer joy she travels with such grace and such flair like an angel without wings her lips are so delicatley soft like a fluffy white cloud a mere hug from her instansouly erases the negative emotions that the day has inflicted as if an ivisible needle injected me as she spreads harmony where ever she may walk seeing her pearly white teeth causes me to smile as well as she draws closer my heart flutters as her seductive lips meet my face i change into a diffrent color known as red her voice omits appeal drawing me to her as moth to a flame i feel at ease as
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